Here is Luc's new story. I have taken the liberty of tidying it up a bit. I can't imagine how hard it is to write a story in a foreign language.
I was chatting with
a neighbour, a sexy woman I have known
for years. My stepmother saw us and didn’t view the flirtation favourably. She
called out to me, loudly ordering me to come in and go to bed straightaway. I
was of course terribly ashamed but I knew I had to obey her. I blushed,
stammered an excuse and took my leave
of my astonished, but amused neighbour. When I had my pyjamas on a few minutes
later, but before I got into bed, I asked
my step mom in which room I had to go to be tucked in. She replied that it was to be in the one
Jordan, my son slept in. He was being allowed to play tennis in the backyard
with his young stepsisters and two of their friends until his usual, early
bedtime. I told my stepmother that he should know I was being sent to bed early
as a punishment and would be sleeping in his bedroom and asked her to tell him that I
wouldn’t be able to join him as I had promised.
She replied that he had better go to bed early too, and she ordered
me to go and get him. I protested. I’d deserved to be punished with an early
bedtime but not my son, and moreover I was already in my pyjamas ready for bed. She replied curtly that it was up to
her and not for me to decide on his bedtime.
"It’s usual for the naughty boy to wear pyjamas when
being bed punished, isn’t it?" She asked, then told me to hurry up and
fetch him. I put my slippers on and went down to the tennis court wearing my
pink, feminine pyjamas and bedroom slippers
One of the twins saw me first. When she burst out laughing,
my son turned around and saw me. The others girls also roared with laughter,
seeing me ready for bed in my pyjamas so early in the afternoon. My son was at
first speechless, then he asked me with a small voice what had happened. I
confessed shamefully that my stepmother had sent me to bed as a punishment
because she caught me flirting with our neighbour while my wife wasn’t there. I
explained that my stepmother wanted him to got to bed now too, even earlier
than our compulsory bedtime and even though he hadn't been a bad boy like I
had been. He started to cry and threw his racket to the ground in anger, but in reality he had no
choice but to follow me, dragging his feet with the girls mocing voices ringing in
our ears.
When we got back home, me in my pink pyjamas, my neighbour asked why my son was in tears. I stammered he had to go to bed too.
"Was he also disobedient?" She asked smiling.
"No, he has not done anything wrong but he has to go to
bed now because we are to sleep in the same room and the room is to be locked."
She told us she was
sorry that we had been given an early beddy-byes because of her, then she wished us nite-nite,
laughing.
While my still upset son undressed and put on his pyjamas, I got our beds ready. My stepmother became impatient and rushed upstairs to check whether or not we were in bed yet. My son was in bed, but I wasn’t because I was getting ready to close the shutters. The window was wide open and my sexy neighbour could see me.
Step mom gave me two slaps on the face and three more on the
bottom then shouted "Off to bed now naughty boy… I hope at least you haven’t forgotten your potties. And has
your whining son his teddy bear?"
My son murmured,
"yes, Madame,“ and I only nodded because I was also about to cry as
I got into bed. Before she closed our
shutters to block out the bright sun out, stepmother calmly told the neighbour from the window that,
"boys need early bedtime and pyjama discipline, especially the one’s who believe they are old
enough to flirt with a neighbour."
The woman replied laughing. "You’re right. An older
naughty boy like your son-in-law certainly worries you and your daughter.“
"Oh sure. We are get peace and quiet when both of them
are well tucked up… Sorry, but now I’ve to prepare them for sleepy-byes.“
The neighbour laughed again and replied, "so it will be
a restful good afternoon for you …goodnight to both the boys!“
After she got us tucked tightly up in bed, she put our dummies in our
mouths, turned the baby monitor on and the light off. She ordered us to stay
quiet since my wife will return soon.
Before I fell asleep a few minutes later, I could still hear
my stepmother and the woman chatting. My stepmother explained her that we had
potties because we are locked in our bedroom and dummies because they help
soothe us to sleep more easily.
Our neighbour agreed, laughing. I confess I felt at once
ashamed and aroused.
Dear Wincy
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for tidying up my deplorable prose. I've a great satisfaction to re-read its after your apposite redactionnal treatment :-)
Please, if you consider they could be interesting, do take the same liberty with my next posts.
Congratulations and many thanks for your blog.
Sincerely.
Luc
Nice to hear Luc is back. I translated many of his previous stories....
ReplyDeleteWonderful story. Love the whole premise of the son been sent to bed early in the afternoon with his father, I presume he also wore nice pink feminine pyjamas. Really loved it.
ReplyDeleteLuc is back and Wincy has been posting more often. This summer is looking better. Thanks for translating an d editing and I hope Luc passes on the rest of his work. Sorry to be such a stranger but recreational surfing time has been tight.
ReplyDelete@John:
ReplyDeleteAt that period, Jordan wore a childish pyjamas, a blue, a yellow or a white with bibs and rattles as patterns. But today, he has to go to bed wearing a feminine nightie.
@Vlad:
"I hope Luc passes on the rest of his work". I'd like but I don't how to proceed.
@Wincy:
OTHERS STORIES ARE READY TO BE POSTED.
COULD I HAVE AN ADRESS MAIL?
MINE IS: luc.holly@bluewin.ch
Greetings to everybody.
Luc
Luc, if Wincy is willing to keep editing and posting your stories, then emailing them to Wincy to put on this blog seems like the best way. I am willing to help you with translating and editing as well, my email is nray999@yahoo.com my French is not very good , but I did experiment with machine translated versions of stories you ousted in French on the old Google group and I could turn it into good English.
ReplyDeleteIf anyone has anything they think is suitalbe for the blog then send it to me here at, wincypj@googlemail.com. If I post it I will give the sender full credit.
ReplyDeleteI am an expert in translation and I have translated all of Luc's works in the past. Most of you know me because of that. Would love to help...
ReplyDeleteSo, Luc, you have the support of wincy and Bethanne. You have the following of me and loads of other people. Please tell us more about your life (and that of your friend, John!
ReplyDeleteAs far as I know, Luc has retired from the early bedtime scene and entered a monastery to reflect on earlier discretions..
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